Thursday, September 17, 2009

"Betrayed"

In the United States, when reading about the Iraqi war we usually find stories about the heroic soldiers who are fighting for our freedom. George Packer takes a different approach in his feature article, “Betrayed”. Packer uses descriptive writing to point out the injustices done to the Iraqi’s by the Americans. The reader really feels like they are reading a firsthand experience of a person’s time in Iraq. Instead of glorifying the American soldiers, Packer points out their unfair treatment to others.

“Betrayed” tells multiple stories of these injustices but Firas’s story made the biggest impact on me. Firas asked to be issued a green card in order to bypass the long lines before entering the Green Zone. (He was translating for the Americans). His request was denied because the card also gave permission to carry a weapon. This story illustrates that despite efforts to prove their loyalty to the United States, safety and security from the American embassy did not extend to them, if anything they contributed to the threat just because they look different.

Americans tend to feel obligated to prove how patriotic they are and refuse to speak poorly of American soldiers. George Packer takes this risk and by doing so informs the readers of the wrong doings taking place in Iraq. By strategically writing this article in a way that reaches the readers heart, perhaps people will be motivated to put an end to this unjust treatment.

1 comment:

  1. I felt a little embarrassed after reading this story. He found so much personal testimony that its evident that this is not just a small issue. The unjust treatment is felt by many. With the help of his descriptions, I was also able to walk through the streets of Iraq and feel the feelings these Iraqis were feeling. The way Packer starts his story by giving evidence of how excited the Iraqis were, knowing the Americans were soon to come, makes the American reader feel even worse. It is an effective strategy. Readers then learn how their hopes and dreams were shot down. Packer causes the reader to really sympathize with the Iraqis, which makes it hard for us to understand why the American soldiers were treating them so terribly. Like you said, it may motivate people to say something about the unjust treatment - Americans were supposed to be there to make life better, but according to this story, they have only made life worse.

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